Rain Whispers

rain whispers …pitter patter, pitter patter, Bougainvillea sways … with lemon-scented breeze… wind rustles tinkling cadence of love… a panorama of pearlescent clouds glides by …carrying dreams from yonder hills drip drop rain…swish me to an enchanting wonderland.. where a meandering river hums a perfect lullaby I want to whisper to you..a melody emanated from rhapsody of mellifluous birds in exuberance of their happiness can’t hold their joy, want to share with the world, a message … murmuring, muttering in a doting hushed voice , ….we found each other... at last ….. July 14, 2021 For " Whispers" Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Lawless

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Jennifer Fenn

Date: 7/27/2021 1:01:00 PM

What a beautiful poem! I like rain, so I had to check out your spin on it. Glad I did!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/29/2021 4:49:00 AM

Thanks, Jen. Rain, probably, brings out poetry in everyone. In India, where I grew up, rains a lot.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/14/2021 11:56:00 AM

Hello Mala, oh Mala this to me sounds to me to be romantic. Good luck in the contest. Love & Friendship. Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/14/2021 3:38:00 PM

Hello Mala, yes I am a romantic at heart. I enjoyed it. Love & Friendship Darlene

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/14/2021 2:45:00 PM

Dear Darlene, you are a romantic at heart. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Love ~ Mala

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/14/2021 11:18:00 AM

Beautiful! All the best for contest

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/14/2021 2:44:00 PM

Thanks, Rama, you are so kind. I actually was not sure if I was entering it! Love ~ Mala

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 7/14/2021 11:18:00 AM

You have not put contest name and sponsor