Rain Through My Window

Rain through my window
Dark clouds,slow breeze and lightning
Hands wet by rain splash
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dua Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 4:39 AM
hey there !! refreshing and a sweet and short poetry !! Love , Saanvi :)))
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June 28, 2013 at 1:11 AM
hey, I need new poems from you!!! just stopping in to say hi and thanks for your comment to my poem.
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June 20, 2013 at 1:32 AM
Welcome to the site. You are off to a good start with this fine first entry.
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June 19, 2013 at 2:12 PM
Hi Jenish, i will be back after work to read all your poems...:-) Linda
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 11:22 PM
I love reading haiku so I want to read all of yours tonight!! Good one to start with, your first post!!
A  Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 7:09 PM
I like your haiku, Jenish, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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June 15, 2013 at 4:52 PM
Jenish. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest in the future* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. You are welcomed to look for me anytime you need certain feedback on any given poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love- LOL) * Always * ;-) Linda
Shines Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 8:13 AM
nice
Mohammed Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 6:51 AM
Welcome to poetrysoup.
Mohammed Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 6:44 AM
Rain through your window,that must be irritating.Nice imagery.
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