Rain - Telangana

Rain Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues
Placed 6th
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Upon the parched earth
Gathered clouds poured down nonstop
Boats on every road
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Alex Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 7:23 PM
"Boats on every road" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Veepuri Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 10:39 AM
Alex, thank you for your visit and coment.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 10:51 AM
Loved that final line! Interesting! Congratulations on your win in my contest, Srinivas!
Veepuri Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 10:38 AM
Kim, thank you for the placement.
Rolland Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 8:02 PM
nice pening, rain, yes, but not too much
Veepuri Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 10:42 AM
Yann, thank you for your compliment.
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