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Rain Streaks Down Window Pane

rain streaks down window pane sadness echoes in thunder's roar teardrops falling from cloudy eyes yet in some distant place laughter colors sky with rainbow 5-18-19 Writing Challenge 2, May 2019, Lind68868 Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart Theme 2: Comparative Thought

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Smita Kulkarni

Date: 6/12/2019 1:15:00 PM

Very sweet poem! -Smita

Brenda Chiri

Date: 6/10/2019 10:30:00 PM

Wow Joseph this truly was beautiful! I see congrats are in order too!;)

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/4/2019 5:47:00 PM

Congratulations for climbing high on the list with this great poem Joseph :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2019 7:29:00 PM

I remember how much I liked this one from before. Congrats on your well deserved win, Joseph.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/24/2019 6:36:00 PM

I love the way your poetry always ends on a positive note of hope. This lovely poem deserves its first placement Joseph. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo : )

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/24/2019 2:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's Lind68868 contest my friend! God bless.... Robert

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/23/2019 12:14:00 PM

Short and powerful Joseph

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/23/2019 9:03:00 AM

This is such a beautiful piece in every respect - imagery, tone, sentiments - short and powerful! Congratulations on a well-deserved top win! Hugs and love. Pandita

Early Jae

Date: 5/22/2019 3:45:00 PM

Wow, just wow! congrats!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/22/2019 1:57:00 PM

Congratulations Joseph on your win in this contest - absolutely fitting and well deserved for being placed first! Hugs, Jennifer.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/21/2019 3:15:00 PM

Lovely, Joseph; enjoyed the contrast between first and second part of the poem. Worthy of its first place in the contest...congratulations! Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2019 12:09:00 PM

- Congratulations on your top placement in D. H. contest Joseph, a wonderful writing :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May
Date: 5/21/2019 1:58:00 PM

Thank you Anne..

Constance La France

Date: 5/21/2019 9:19:00 AM

Joseph , congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this emotional write!

Joseph May
Date: 5/21/2019 1:55:00 PM

Thank you so much DH, I am honored to be in the top spot..

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/21/2019 8:46:00 AM

Congrats on top win my friend...excellent entry, Joseph...^WW^

Joseph May
Date: 5/21/2019 1:57:00 PM

Thank you Winged Warrior..

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/20/2019 9:42:00 PM

Congratulations Joseph, on this win. ~ Brandy

Joseph May
Date: 5/21/2019 1:57:00 PM

Thank you Brandy..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2019 3:24:00 PM

wow, a top spot.Congratulations, Joseph. well deserved.

Joseph May
Date: 5/21/2019 1:56:00 PM

Thank you Andrea..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/19/2019 1:58:00 PM

- Beautifully explained, Joseph :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May
Date: 5/19/2019 5:58:00 PM

Thank you Anne...hugs

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/18/2019 3:08:00 PM

Very well said

Joseph May
Date: 5/18/2019 7:51:00 PM

Thank you Allen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2019 12:50:00 PM

you did an amazing job with this challenge, Joseph.

Joseph May
Date: 5/18/2019 7:51:00 PM

Thank you Andrea

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/18/2019 8:14:00 AM

Raindrops can hide the pain, the sadness and tears. The sound of thunder can hide an ache that echos in the heart. Yes, in some distant place " laughter colors sky with rainbow" You have so many emotions tangling through this. Beautiful in every way. A Favorite for me. As I love the rain and the way your words touch every moment. ~ Brandy

Joseph May
Date: 5/18/2019 7:50:00 PM

Thank you Brandy, and thanks for making it a fave...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/18/2019 7:16:00 AM

I liked the turn on the 4th line to present a contrast with the first 3 lines..well written, Joseph.

Joseph May
Date: 5/18/2019 7:50:00 PM

Thank you Vijay

Jan Allison

Date: 5/18/2019 12:43:00 AM

Beautifully expressed Joseph the final lines are so uplifting, adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May
Date: 5/18/2019 6:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Jan, and thanks for adding it to your faves...Hugs

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/17/2019 11:49:00 PM

Your poem’s sadly beautiful imagery and the wistfullness of your two last lines is captivating and moving, Joseph. Your verse is framed splendidly in Robert’s new form. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Joseph May
Date: 5/18/2019 6:57:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words Susan