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Rain Streaks Down Window Pane

rain streaks down window pane
 sadness echoes in thunder's roar
 teardrops falling from cloudy eyes
 yet in some distant place
 laughter colors sky with rainbow 

 5-18-19
 Writing Challenge 2, May 2019, Lind68868 Contest
 Sponsor: Dear Heart
 Theme 2: Comparative Thought

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Smita Kulkarni

June 12, 2019 at 1:15 PM

Very sweet poem! -Smita

Brenda Chiri

June 10, 2019 at 10:30 PM

Wow Joseph this truly was beautiful! I see congrats are in order too!;)

Heidi Sands

June 4, 2019 at 5:47 PM

Congratulations for climbing high on the list with this great poem Joseph :)

Andrea Dietrich

May 24, 2019 at 7:29 PM

I remember how much I liked this one from before. Congrats on your well deserved win, Joseph.

Connie Marcum Wong

May 24, 2019 at 6:36 PM

I love the way your poetry always ends on a positive note of hope. This lovely poem deserves its first placement Joseph. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo : )

Robert Lindley

May 24, 2019 at 2:43 PM

Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's Lind68868 contest my friend! God bless.... Robert

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

May 23, 2019 at 12:14 PM

Short and powerful Joseph

Pandita Sietesantos

May 23, 2019 at 9:03 AM

This is such a beautiful piece in every respect - imagery, tone, sentiments - short and powerful! Congratulations on a well-deserved top win! Hugs and love. Pandita

Early Jae

May 22, 2019 at 3:45 PM

Wow, just wow! congrats!

Jennifer Proxenos

May 22, 2019 at 1:57 PM

Congratulations Joseph on your win in this contest - absolutely fitting and well deserved for being placed first! Hugs, Jennifer.

Paul Callus

May 21, 2019 at 3:15 PM

Lovely, Joseph; enjoyed the contrast between first and second part of the poem. Worthy of its first place in the contest...congratulations! Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 21, 2019 at 12:09 PM

- Congratulations on your top placement in D. H. contest Joseph, a wonderful writing :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

May 21, 2019 at 1:58 PM

Thank you Anne..

Constance La France

May 21, 2019 at 9:19 AM

Joseph , congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this emotional write!

Joseph May

May 21, 2019 at 1:55 PM

Thank you so much DH, I am honored to be in the top spot..

Winged Warrior

May 21, 2019 at 8:46 AM

Congrats on top win my friend...excellent entry, Joseph...^WW^

Joseph May

May 21, 2019 at 1:57 PM

Thank you Winged Warrior..

Brandy Nicole

May 20, 2019 at 9:42 PM

Congratulations Joseph, on this win. ~ Brandy

Joseph May

May 21, 2019 at 1:57 PM

Thank you Brandy..

Andrea Dietrich

May 20, 2019 at 3:24 PM

wow, a top spot.Congratulations, Joseph. well deserved.

Joseph May

May 21, 2019 at 1:56 PM

Thank you Andrea..

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 19, 2019 at 1:58 PM

- Beautifully explained, Joseph :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

May 19, 2019 at 5:58 PM

Thank you Anne...hugs

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

May 18, 2019 at 3:08 PM

Very well said

Joseph May

May 18, 2019 at 7:51 PM

Thank you Allen

Andrea Dietrich

May 18, 2019 at 12:50 PM

you did an amazing job with this challenge, Joseph.

Joseph May

May 18, 2019 at 7:51 PM

Thank you Andrea

Brandy Nicole

May 18, 2019 at 8:14 AM

Raindrops can hide the pain, the sadness and tears. The sound of thunder can hide an ache that echos in the heart. Yes, in some distant place " laughter colors sky with rainbow" You have so many emotions tangling through this. Beautiful in every way. A Favorite for me. As I love the rain and the way your words touch every moment. ~ Brandy

Joseph May

May 18, 2019 at 7:50 PM

Thank you Brandy, and thanks for making it a fave...

Vijay Pandit

May 18, 2019 at 7:16 AM

I liked the turn on the 4th line to present a contrast with the first 3 lines..well written, Joseph.

Joseph May

May 18, 2019 at 7:50 PM

Thank you Vijay

Jan Allison

May 18, 2019 at 12:43 AM

Beautifully expressed Joseph the final lines are so uplifting, adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

May 18, 2019 at 6:57 AM

Thank you so much Jan, and thanks for adding it to your faves...Hugs

Susan Ashley

May 17, 2019 at 11:49 PM

Your poem’s sadly beautiful imagery and the wistfullness of your two last lines is captivating and moving, Joseph. Your verse is framed splendidly in Robert’s new form. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Joseph May

May 18, 2019 at 6:57 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words Susan

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