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rain serenade

the cadence of rain
     as I drift into slumber . . . 
                   dreaming of puddles

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sara Etgen-Baker

August 3, 2026 at 2:25 PM

perfect Haiku...wishing you well

sara Etgen-Baker

July 30, 2026 at 5:21 PM

awww....how gentle!

Howard Kerr

July 30, 2026 at 5:19 AM

This is an absolutely incredible Haiku, Andrea. Picturesque imagery abounds. Howard

Valsa George

July 29, 2026 at 10:24 PM

The song of rain is a lullaby that will put us to sleep. Beautiful haiku.

Paige Hind

July 29, 2026 at 12:47 AM

lovely dreams :)

Dorothy Gibbons

July 28, 2026 at 12:32 AM

Andrea I loveee this dreamy haiku ~ I'm dreaming with you let's grab our wellies ( scottish for rain boots ) dunno what you guys say... and let's have fun in the puddles hugzzz <3<3

Sam Kauffman

July 27, 2026 at 12:14 PM

Love it, Andrea!!! Having grown up in the NW, this brings back sweet memories of going to sleep in the rain! Blessings for your dreams! Hope there is an umbrella in there somewhere!

Paula Goldsmith

July 26, 2026 at 8:14 AM

I enjoyed reading. Your "rain serenade" is a wonderful write. We just got some rain after many months of dry/hot weather. Have a lovely day writing away............

Victor Buhagiar

July 26, 2026 at 7:56 AM

I love the sound of rain falling. It lulls me to sleep.

Mike Bayles

July 26, 2026 at 7:12 AM

Sweet, Andrea.

Sotto Poet

July 26, 2026 at 5:51 AM

Fantastic job, Andrea, and the sound of rain in your haiku is really stunning.

Miraj Raha

July 26, 2026 at 2:48 AM

Hi Andrea, i love the sound of rain and better still to hop in puddles, this piece reminded me of my childhood, very relatable.

Natasha L Scragg

July 26, 2026 at 2:39 AM

This is lovely Andrea. The sound of the rain can be relaxing. There's something about how you have presented your poem that helps with the feel you are putting across. It's wonderful :-D