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Rain Rain Go Away

Rain rain go away come back another day sun sun dazzle me as I take a peek and see rabbits hares and cottontails, Hurray Hurray! Rain rain go away come back another day in the forest lives a fae when it rains she starts to flee Rain rain go away come back another day sun sun dazzle me as I take a peek and see

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/10/2023 12:00:00 PM

Cute one Vie. Poo little fat in the rain made me smile. Congratulations! :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/7/2023 7:01:00 PM

Vie, this is so cute and whimsical! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/8/2023 3:05:00 PM

Thank you Kim glad you enjoyed it

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/1/2023 3:43:00 AM

Creative way to go with this triolet. Good line to carry through throughout the poem. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/31/2023 5:13:00 AM

- July has been a rainy month this year ... go away ... go to a place where they need water ... - A lovely poem, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/31/2023 2:39:00 PM

I know that feeling Anne, we got quite a bit here in T O , but today was sunny and cool, lovely day, thanks for dropping in :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/31/2023 4:33:00 AM

I like the lively voice of your poem, Vienna. So lovely to read.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/31/2023 2:39:00 PM

Thankyou Vijay, she wanted something fun for the contest, cheery is always good, :)