Mystic Rose Rose Poet Triolet

Rain Rain Go Away

Rain rain go away come back another day 
sun sun dazzle me as I take a peek and see
rabbits hares and cottontails, Hurray Hurray!  
Rain rain go away come back another day 
in the forest lives a fae    
when it rains she starts to flee 
Rain rain go away come back another day 
sun sun dazzle me as I take a peek and see

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Linda Alice Fowler August 10, 2023 at 12:00 PM Cute one Vie. Poo little fat in the rain made me smile. Congratulations! :)

Kim Merryman August 7, 2023 at 7:01 PM Vie, this is so cute and whimsical! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Mystic Rose Rose August 8, 2023 at 3:05 PM Thank you Kim glad you enjoyed it

Sara Kendrick August 1, 2023 at 3:43 AM Creative way to go with this triolet. Good line to carry through throughout the poem. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2023 at 5:13 AM - July has been a rainy month this year ... go away ... go to a place where they need water ... - A lovely poem, Vie Rose :) - hugs Mystic Rose Rose July 31, 2023 at 2:39 PM I know that feeling Anne, we got quite a bit here in T O , but today was sunny and cool, lovely day, thanks for dropping in :)

Vijay Pandit July 31, 2023 at 4:33 AM I like the lively voice of your poem, Vienna. So lovely to read. Mystic Rose Rose July 31, 2023 at 2:39 PM Thankyou Vijay, she wanted something fun for the contest, cheery is always good, :)