Emily Kroeger Poet Free verse

Rain, Rain, Fall Down On Me!

Rain, Rain, Fall down on me!
         Please take away
               my Pain.

Rain, Rain, Fall down on me!
         Be my freind not
            my enimy.

Rain, Rain, Fall down on me!
         Be my escape.

Rain, Rain, Fall down on me!

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Jay Loveless May 7, 2009 at 8:01 AM Walking in the rain...so no one can tell that your crying... i know the feeling Em. ~Jese

Shirin Neshat April 30, 2009 at 10:21 AM nice flow.

Sharon Winter April 25, 2009 at 1:51 PM I love the rain Emily. Sometimes I feel as though it washes away all my troubles and leaves me renewed. Great write. Love, Shar

Not Anymore April 25, 2009 at 11:14 AM I like the message, not the grammar.

Julie Loveless April 21, 2009 at 2:36 PM awww emers this is cute!:)