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Rain Prevails

a cloud floats above.. holds our day tight in its hands.. although rain prevails..

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Constance La France

Date: 5/23/2011 2:27:00 PM

A lovely haiku, Michael, it is raining here also, and thanks so much for my placement in your contest~~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2011 9:41:00 PM

You are flowing with creativity these days, Michael! very nice haiku.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/22/2011 1:59:00 PM

Polish off those golf clubs, Michael. It can't rain forever. You created a thought-provoking poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/22/2011 1:20:00 PM

lol you are suppose to embrace the rain Michael lol, love Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/22/2011 12:41:00 PM

Very descriptive work..I can see the scene..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..We could use some clouds with rain again here..We are getting dry..Thanks for selecting my work to be one that placed in your contest..I know that selecting winners is not an easy task...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/22/2011 8:58:00 AM

true luv can never be broken by anything .. clouds or rain or anything Michael.. beautiful imagery filled with passionate statements... a solid bond...forever..luv.. u will have soup mail shortly from your Jersey Girl luv..

Jack Horne

Date: 5/22/2011 7:52:00 AM

LOL, your clubs would certainly get dusty in England! Thanks, Michael - your contest was great fun : )

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/22/2011 6:55:00 AM

Just venting over my Golf Clubs getting dusty...lol.... Hey inspiration comes from everywhere... Enjoy your Sunday Soup Family...