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Rain Prevails

a cloud floats above..
holds our day tight in its hands..
although rain prevails..

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Constance La France

May 23, 2011 at 2:27 PM

A lovely haiku, Michael, it is raining here also, and thanks so much for my placement in your contest~~

Andrea Dietrich

May 22, 2011 at 9:41 PM

You are flowing with creativity these days, Michael! very nice haiku.

Carolyn Devonshire

May 22, 2011 at 1:59 PM

Polish off those golf clubs, Michael. It can't rain forever. You created a thought-provoking poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

May 22, 2011 at 1:20 PM

lol you are suppose to embrace the rain Michael lol, love Wilma

Sara Kendrick

May 22, 2011 at 12:41 PM

Very descriptive work..I can see the scene..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..We could use some clouds with rain again here..We are getting dry..Thanks for selecting my work to be one that placed in your contest..I know that selecting winners is not an easy task...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 22, 2011 at 8:58 AM

true luv can never be broken by anything .. clouds or rain or anything Michael.. beautiful imagery filled with passionate statements... a solid bond...forever..luv.. u will have soup mail shortly from your Jersey Girl luv..