Rain Poem

                      OH!                               Then in a
              Water-A-Story!                         River arrives
        An indestructible journey                     I
     Of a drop once locked in soil                      C
   as fragrance Or flowing in veins.                     K
  in parched throats meeting Seas.                       L
 as river or trapped in a royal-moat                        Erupting 
 as lone pearl sucked by fierce sun.                            Soaring
  making Sky, Dew & Winds heady.                               Flaring
   in company O snakes as venom                           
    Been wine of Gods in Heaven.                           joys..        free
      Then comes Earth's callings.                                     
        to melt stored memories                             fierce      Force
         unburdening imprints.                                            awake
            to rejuvenate Life.                                             and wet
               back on Earth                                            water veins
                  As Rains!                                           channel routes
                       A                                               Droplets Merged
                     Wish                                         In where rests flow
                  Sincere.To                                  Where flows the rest
               Harvest every.                              Stored in every pore
            drop that rains as                            Fragrances emanate
           blessings.And every.                         pulsating molecules
          grain that is_Erupting                         fluidous continuum
          Sprouting in the Fields         it is           Stored nature erupts
          Thinking Sustainability.    time to refill     Uncontrolled ecstasy
           We would be well -off.  Pitter patter rain     Benevolent mother  
            A life of Sufficiency    riding the wave train    A sensuous lover.
               & Prosperity for,     bubbles               on        The tenacious
                         All.            the head                               She’s caring                                          
                                    Can’t   Drink                ON              Feminine
                                    a           ??                    &                     Force
                                   b         Yes  But           Onward                Alive
                                   s      Not everyday     To Nearest            
                                   t    only two day in    Pub Soaking              In                          
                                   a   A year When it’s  Pouring bliss               all
                                    i  raining and when  Sprightly spirit            hues     
                                     n it does not rain!   Spring_in feet~         Milk in                           
                                       Qn. And when it    Cheery-clink          the breast
                                         drizzles? Then     strong_neat        In baptizing
                                           I have one          Pour_on          Ritual Dance
                                            extra for            rock__s          Mating in love 
                                             the rain            firm__ly.         Fluids’ merge, 
                                              and for            root_ed           Humans owe
                                               its                  Now-               To their birth,
                                               stop                For a                 As it rains
     Two happy men on way to pub-ing and some swizzle.               On Earth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 11/24/2024 4:38:00 AM
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Date: 11/19/2024 3:48:00 PM
Hello Amitabh Divakar, Wow! It is amazing how you did this poem. Blessings my friend. /Darlene//
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/24/2024 10:03:00 AM
Hello Amitabh Divakar, you are welcome. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Amitabh Divakar
Date: 11/24/2024 4:36:00 AM
Many thanks Darlene!
Date: 10/5/2024 6:00:00 AM
Wow. This has to take some time and effort. Interesting concrete style Amitabh
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Amitabh Divakar
Date: 10/5/2024 6:07:00 AM
Wow . Thanx , I am still editing
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