Rain Painted Rose

Don't we all live deep within the walls of a 
rain-painted rose.
Moments that once were fresh are set ablaze.
Whose bones are jewel-encrusted with decay.
Within our deepest reds. 
The scent of saints and dreams is bled.
Glancing off a soul of glass.
So very briefly glowing off the gentle face.

As every breath tends to climb toward light
reaching the softest edge, giving away.
Tumbling down a stairwell of thorns.
The clowns of living cycling round and round a face forlorn.

Dreams are placed where jugglers juggle dented circus pins.
Between the hell of the hopeless.
The kiln of God and the devil's twisted rope-

Don't we all live within the walls of a 
rain-painted rose.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Richards Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 7:06 PM
I have neglected commenting on so many poems and have missed reading wonderful work, ...this poem makes me wake up and smell the roses...and climb up the stairwell of thorny gems. I must read more.:)
Dailey Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 7:37 PM
Loved the title and a lot of the lines but I don't consider this a rhyme styled poem as it is coded. Still I enjoyed the poem.
A   Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 5:22 PM
:-) pd
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 3:32 PM
gosh, this is REALLY good free verse. Such imagery!! I don't see many like this one!
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