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By Michael and Robert Liguori

The wind is blowing All the branches All the leaves Are moving in the wind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/6/2023 1:23:00 AM
This is a lovely visual verse Robert. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 9/23/2023 11:02:00 PM
This sounds like the beginning of a song. Inside is still/rain's music beats on sill/it's not long until/you'll be home with me - cute collab!
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