Rain Or the Lack of It

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rain dissipated swiftly disappearing, evaporating, scattering dry clouds blew over torrentless Written: 6/5/23 I used the type of form where it is the number of words per line: 1, 2, 3, 4, 1

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Valsa George

Date: 6/7/2023 4:40:00 AM

We are having plenty of rain. After a hot spell, when it has started raining, there is rain every day. Beautiful Cinquain, dear Sara !

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/7/2023 8:35:00 AM

Valsa, I am glad you are getting the needed rain with its cooling effect in warm weather plus most of the time rain is just what the earth needs to stay alive. Thanks for dropping by with a kind review of my work. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/6/2023 1:52:00 AM

We are in June and it is raining in sunny Malta.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/6/2023 3:42:00 AM

Victor, We usually have some rain and a lot of humidity in June but so far it has been better with less humidity which is nice but we are lacking in rain now. We had rain earlier this spring with one day having 6 inches in a few hours. It flooded an enclosed play porch where the grandchildren play, flooded the basement which has not happened since 1994. I had a mess to clean. I realized that I am no longer able to do all of that. I am still not completely recovered from it. Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/5/2023 10:19:00 AM

No chance of a drought here Sara, we have plenty of it. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/5/2023 1:13:00 PM

Tom, Awesome that you have plenty of rain as long as it doesn't interfere with your lifestyle. Your visits are uplifting. Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 6/5/2023 5:13:00 AM

very descriptive indeed - & quite tricky to write, I'd imagine

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/5/2023 1:12:00 PM

Jack, They are not so easy but fun to do. One has to put on a thinking cap. Thanks for the visit..Sara