Rain Or the Lack of It

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Image result for dry clouds floating by

rain
dissipated swiftly
disappearing, evaporating, scattering
dry clouds blew over
torrentless     

Written: 6/5/23
I used the type of form where it is the number of words per line:
1, 2, 3, 4, 1

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Valsa George

Date: 6/7/2023 4:40:00 AM

We are having plenty of rain. After a hot spell, when it has started raining, there is rain every day. Beautiful Cinquain, dear Sara !

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/7/2023 8:35:00 AM

Valsa, I am glad you are getting the needed rain with its cooling effect in warm weather plus most of the time rain is just what the earth needs to stay alive. Thanks for dropping by with a kind review of my work. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/6/2023 1:52:00 AM

We are in June and it is raining in sunny Malta.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/6/2023 3:42:00 AM

Victor, We usually have some rain and a lot of humidity in June but so far it has been better with less humidity which is nice but we are lacking in rain now. We had rain earlier this spring with one day having 6 inches in a few hours. It flooded an enclosed play porch where the grandchildren play, flooded the basement which has not happened since 1994. I had a mess to clean. I realized that I am no longer able to do all of that. I am still not completely recovered from it. Sara