rain on lake

sun rays chiseling
hieroglyphs reflections
on lake ice blanket

raindrops dotting lake
with circular rippling mist
shadowing mirror

geese flight arrival
liquid lake serenity
parted by curved waves
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Radice Avatar
August 3, 2024 at 4:15 AM
Nature wrapped up in haiku. Lovely. Cheers - Gary
Nicholsen Avatar
May 11, 2024 at 6:57 AM
Adore the Lake awesome write
Jones Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 8:12 AM
What beautiful cascading thoughts on reflection! These haikus inspire peaceful feelings of awe!
Kendrick Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 8:16 AM
Ahhh!! Very descriptive lines penned. Since we don't have frozen lakes here, I can't relate except maybe from seeing this scene on TV. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara K
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