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rain on lake

raindrops dotting lake
with circular rippling mist
shadowing mirror

sun rays chiseling
hieroglyphs reflections
on lake's ice blanket

geese flight departure
one staying with injured mate
God's love reflection

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Date: 8/3/2024 4:15:00 AM
Nature wrapped up in haiku. Lovely. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 5/11/2024 6:57:00 AM
Adore the Lake awesome write
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Date: 3/18/2024 8:12:00 AM
What beautiful cascading thoughts on reflection! These haikus inspire peaceful feelings of awe!
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Date: 2/4/2024 8:16:00 AM
Ahhh!! Very descriptive lines penned. Since we don't have frozen lakes here, I can't relate except maybe from seeing this scene on TV. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara K
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