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Rain On Hot Asphalt

rain
gently
hop landing
on hot asphalt
sizzling in a melodic rhythm

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Jeanne Mcgee

September 22, 2019 at 12:09 PM

Wonderful! I can smell it too.

Caren Krutsinger

September 23, 2019 at 3:13 AM

We were supposed to get five inches of rain in Kansas yesterday. I think we only got two.

Tom Cunningham

September 22, 2019 at 12:02 PM

Saw that last year in Florida, the rain bouncing and sizzling in the heat. Tkm

Caren Krutsinger

September 23, 2019 at 3:14 AM

It is fun to watch!

Regina Mcintosh

September 22, 2019 at 1:37 AM

Nice poem, Caren - I only just tried this form. It's a little different. I've written some shorter forms, but just did this one. I enjoyed reading and blessings to you

Caren Krutsinger

September 22, 2019 at 6:26 AM

Thank you my friend.