Rain On Hot Asphalt

rain gently hop landing on hot asphalt sizzling in a melodic rhythm

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/22/2019 12:09:00 PM

Wonderful! I can smell it too.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/23/2019 3:13:00 AM

We were supposed to get five inches of rain in Kansas yesterday. I think we only got two.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/22/2019 12:02:00 PM

Saw that last year in Florida, the rain bouncing and sizzling in the heat. Tkm

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/23/2019 3:14:00 AM

It is fun to watch!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/22/2019 1:37:00 AM

Nice poem, Caren - I only just tried this form. It's a little different. I've written some shorter forms, but just did this one. I enjoyed reading and blessings to you

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/22/2019 6:26:00 AM

Thank you my friend.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/21/2019 11:03:00 PM

Perfect image. I can just picture the rain sizzling. Cheers, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/22/2019 6:26:00 AM

We are supposed to get five inches of rain today!