Rain - Liquid Angel

Rain - her story is in her forms
past, present or future, same are norms

Rain – she has a complaint
dislikes being quoted as she (Rain) is FALLING
but had she not fallen
seeds would not have risen
land would have been brazen 
Life would have become extinct
such is her importance, so distinct

Rain – she has a compliment
she is loved by all – kids, young, old alike
kids joyous over floating of paper boats 
young ecstatic in love over drizzle drumming pane
old ambling in memory lane over hot coffee     
raindrops filling Life's ocean with cheerful moments
joy waves kissing Life's shores with each movement  

Rain – she is Liquid Devil
water, in excess gushing monstrously
tsunami causing devastation
consuming life all of sudden
destroying flora & fauna  
receding water spreading epidemics
drenched havoc failing normalcy academics

Rain – she is Liquid Angel
water, life to all – human, animal, trees
in womb protecting embryo
in tomb blending concrete mix 
generating electricity, axis of all motion  
offering hope to desert through oasis
frozen at Poles averting earth's nemesis
    
Rain - her story is in her forms
past, present or future, same are norms

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By Hitendra Mehta
Honorable Mention - Members Contest - "Rain, The Story " by - A Rambling Poet
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 16, 2011 at 4:50 PM
Congrats on your win as well I enjoyed your very much. Jack
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January 16, 2011 at 4:47 PM
Thanks so much for your congrats. Im so pleased you enjoy my poem. Jack B
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January 14, 2011 at 9:33 AM
Congratulations Hitendra on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol
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January 13, 2011 at 4:39 PM
By the way, GREAT poem!
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January 13, 2011 at 4:38 PM
Congtatulations with your entry in the contest, Hitendra. Glad to see you on the winners list. LUv, Andrea
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January 13, 2011 at 1:37 PM
Congratulations on yur fine win in Constance's Contest, Hitendra! Always, Annalise
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January 13, 2011 at 12:20 PM
Whether Rain is complaining or complimenting, acting like a Liquid Angel or a Liquid Devil, she is certainly a memorable character in your poem, Hitendra. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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January 13, 2011 at 8:46 AM
Just the title alone, is clever beyond words....I love this one, Hitendra....just love it!! Congratulations!
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January 13, 2011 at 8:02 AM
Beautiful write my friend and congrats on your win also in the Rain, the Story contest. Love and best wishes....Ravindra....Hitendra Mehta
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January 13, 2011 at 6:43 AM
Congratulations on this HM win in the contest of Constance, Hitendra
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January 13, 2011 at 3:26 AM
opposites attract, hitendra... beautifully woven tale!! cheers for bagging a great win in the contest!! : ) nette
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January 12, 2011 at 9:46 PM
Congratulations on you well deserved win, dear Hitendra!!! Thank you for your comment too. LOve, Iolanda
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January 12, 2011 at 8:43 PM
Congrats Hitendra on your HM in the Rain Story contest with this exquisite entry my friend.. enjoy a very special honor with luv..
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January 12, 2011 at 8:04 PM
Very nice. Lots of congratulations for this win.
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January 12, 2011 at 9:59 AM
Hi there! Please enter my new contest HIGHLIGHTING poets outside the USA called Foreign Exchange, submit your best verse any form any topic. Put the contry you are writing from on the bottom. I'm looking forward to reading more of your verses. Light & Love
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December 30, 2010 at 2:14 AM
The biggest !WOW! ever, Good luck in the contest'' Lin~Ra
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December 29, 2010 at 4:32 AM
Nice personifications of Rain covering all the attributes, Hintendra, Good luck in the contest,
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