Rain - India

pregnant dams scream 
green-gown-clad earth maiden smiles ---
Indira* in moods



*Indira is considered to be the god of rain in Hindu mythology
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August 1, 2023 at 4:31 AM
Lovely imagery, Chris! Congratulations on your win
Alex Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 5:22 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Murray Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 1:29 AM
As a midwife I love the image of the dam and know well what it can mean when waters break. Wonderful and well deserved placemen.
Alex Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 3:12 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 10:54 AM
Love the imagery, Chris! Congratulations on your second place win in my contest!
Alex Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 7:20 PM
Thank you very much for allowing me to participate in your contest. May God Bless You!
George Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 9:33 PM
It has been raining incessantly these days and many rivers are in spate. Great Haiku.
Alex Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 10:59 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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