Teddy Kimathi Poet Free verse

Rain In the Wild

Birds scatter in the air
as they head back to their nests

Rivers begin to create
beautiful circular waves

The smell of rain
fills the air once more,
as droplets of rain come
down to embrace the ground

The jungle is alive again
in the endless rhythm created
by raindrops and the earth

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Anne-Lise Andresen October 10, 2014 at 8:23 AM - Many beautiful 1st place winning poem ..... - I enjoy reading yours - well done Teddy !! - Congratulations! - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Teddy Kimathi October 10, 2014 at 8:58 AM Thank you very much for your sweet and kind applause Anne Lise! ^_^ Have a Happy Weekend too!!! ^_^ <3

Brenda Meier-Hans October 10, 2014 at 7:37 AM Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem. I can imagine how important rain can be to some countries were they wait and long for it. Teddy Kimathi October 10, 2014 at 8:04 AM Thank you for your applause Brenda! ^_^ Our ancestors had celebrations and festivals, marking the onset of rains. Today, we still have some medicine men doing divinations, to invite rain when dry-spells have stayed for long.

Dr.Ram Mehta October 10, 2014 at 6:00 AM Enjoyed the write with a fine take, Teddy, congrats Teddy Kimathi October 10, 2014 at 7:54 AM I'm so sorry Dr. Ram Mehta. There was probably a network error... Thanks once again for applauding my work, and for your morale support. Regards, Teddy. Teddy Kimathi October 10, 2014 at 7:51 AM Hi Jan. Thank you so much for enjoying my work, and applauding it! ^_^

Jan Allison October 10, 2014 at 4:29 AM wonderful imagery Teddy this is a delightful read:-) many congrats on your win. hugs jan xxx Teddy Kimathi October 10, 2014 at 7:52 AM Hi Jan. Thank you so much for enjoying my work, and applauding it! ^_^

Len Gasun October 10, 2014 at 2:39 AM Congratulations my dear poet friend Teddy. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora Teddy Kimathi October 10, 2014 at 3:24 AM I am greatly honored and glad that I have won this contest! I am looking forward to sharing more in the future! ^_^ Regards, Teddy.