Rain In the Night

I lay in bed listening to the rain in the night
Patter on my roof, patter, patter
I thought about all I have lost, wiped away, 
	-  Gone  -
As if water washed it all away
No, it was people, circumstance that did
Not to be found, retrieved or replaced again

Nothing to mend the heart or fill the emptiness within
The rain kept falling into the night, as I shut my eyes to sleep
Listening, I was comforted by the patter, patter
Like footsteps returning, faces to see again
Words left unspoken, now able to be said

In this life there is only once chance to fully make it right
-	Resolution or completion    -
Either way, no-one knows when it can happen
A presence in life suddenly washed away, out of sight
Only to return in dreams, when the eyes shut….
To the patter of rain falling in the night

Heidi Sands
5/13/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/14/2017 12:36:00 PM
I love the way that you made reflection beautiful just like the sound of the rain well done Heidi in it goes. :) :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/14/2017 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Edward :)
Date: 5/13/2017 11:29:00 PM
A very beautiful, and soothing poem. I think the rain can induce a sort of comforting calm in us
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/14/2017 8:16:00 AM
Thank you Gayle. Yes, it can. :)
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