Rain, Hail and Snow

Rain, Hail and Snow is made in the love of you and I
Touched by the flirting of your eyes
Warmed by the comfort of your smile
Invitations you make 
With the irresistible way you speak to the heart of me
Then patiently wait for the shell to break and reveal the Man I am.
Leaning over my sleeping face and welcoming me into the next day.
Spreading your wings and opening your heart for my shelter at night.
Rain, Hail and Snow is made in the same way
The Sun warms the water and it rises to the sky
The heat touches the clouds and it drops on you and I
And whether our hearts warm the atmosphere or our emotions turn cold
The weather will be the love of you and I....
Rain, Hail or Snow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Culverhouse Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 10:31 AM
very poetic piece, enjoyed reading today.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 6:32 AM
Very cleverly done! The way you blend the natural elements with emotions both good and bad is remarkable. BRAVO Keislam! Best wishes, Keith
White Avatar
September 1, 2008 at 12:54 PM
this is a beautiful write, with passion, love and security, ans the srtong bond that exist between the two of you, take care D-nyce
Burton Avatar
July 31, 2008 at 7:42 PM
wow,speechless.really enjoyed it and suprised you dont have many comments.
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