.............(Rain Haiku)

Drops on the river

Silver ripples spread-

Rust colors the bank



Remembering getting caught in a fall
shower while fishing on the Klamath River.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 5:50 AM
It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Barbara. Wishing you the best in the contest. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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May 19, 2010 at 12:57 AM
Great visual in L3 Bg.Rgds Brian & Thank you for your kind words
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May 18, 2010 at 5:02 PM
Great entry Barb and good luck in Rick's first contest with this terrific write and footnote... enjoyed...luv.. Linda-Marie..
Green Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 5:00 PM
Nice! Great description and feel.
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May 18, 2010 at 4:16 PM
Very descriptive Haiku... I like watching the ripples grow from something hitting the water like a raindrop...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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May 18, 2010 at 4:10 PM
If it was a warm day, I'll bet those raindrops were welcome, Barbara. Great imagery! Love, Carolyn
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