Rain Fall

thunder rolls,
 and my hear soars. 
my love for you grows each time i get a new message.
 my eyes are bright, the rain falls. 

and i fall along side with it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 10, 2013 at 8:55 PM
Aryain, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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June 4, 2013 at 10:03 PM
Aryain. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda
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June 2, 2013 at 12:09 PM
So true.. so emotive. Great write. xx
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