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Rain Drops

A drop of rain hits the pavement and explodes into hunreds of little rain drops laying all over the dark cold pavement.  I cant help but feel like this is like my life i finally get everything into one raindrop.  Then it all hits the pavement and its back into hundreds of little drops all over the place.  And i have to pick up all the little drops all over again only for it all to hit the dark cold pavement yet one more time . Maybe this is why we are sad when it rains or. Maybe this is why we are tired when it rains because we have givin all we can give but that rain drop still hits the ground.

Copyright © Alexis Schoedel | Year Posted 2012

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Debbie Duncan Date: 9/26/2012 11:57:00 PM awesome write Lexy ;},,,,, but I like the rain,,,, not the hard freezing windy rain though,,, I used to write about the rain,,,, back when I was 20 ;} thank for reading my I was There Watching;} hope to read more from you! Login to Reply Alexis Schoedel Date: 9/27/2012 6:27:00 AM well yes for some people the rain is very relaxing..but im glad u liked it anyway!!<3

Sukmawati Komala Date: 9/26/2012 9:57:00 PM beautiful write Alexis..enjoy reading your Rain drops this morning,..delight my day thank you my dearest one :) Login to Reply Alexis Schoedel Date: 9/27/2012 6:25:00 AM thank you! im happy i could make your day a little happier!<3

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/26/2012 7:53:00 AM Alexis, welcome to P-Soup - hope you have a lot of fun to share your poems here with us. You write very well - like your poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Alexis Schoedel Date: 9/26/2012 7:24:00 PM Thank you very much for welcoming me! And i am glad u like the poem. i will be posting more soon!

Richard Palmer Date: 9/26/2012 6:58:00 AM after doing years of journey in life I share with you a secret,walk with a bucket when it rains,get other drops into your bucket this will strengthen and build you,in modern english,help to strengthen others they will be there when you are falling to catch you before you hit the ground,great write Alexis and welcome to the Soup Login to Reply Alexis Schoedel Date: 9/26/2012 7:13:00 AM Thank you very much! it means a lot to me.