Rain Drops

falling rain, hearing every drop loud as day. cutting my incomplete sentence, I can't seem to finish. thinking over & over again. crossing each other. confusion steps up & the feeling of emptiness rises up. watching a sundown wondering will the sun rise up again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Irisha Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 4:59 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem.
Life Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 11:15 PM
:) thanks
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 5:23 AM
Interesting poem here..you can think of it in several ways...enjoyed
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