RAIN DROPS

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06/30/24

Raindrops 2

Third Place

Contest by JCB Brul

             Rains falling :
    Small droplets forming ripples
            on shallow pool
       in concentric circles
       growing bigger and decaying 
       reforming recreating .

      Rains drizzle.
      Raindrops 
      fall on leaf lamina
       kissed by blowing breeze
        in zest and zing.

      Showers of raindrops 
      on running river
     propagating merrily.

       I am sensing smelling sadness of sky
       releasing in cries of bursting clouds.
       I am blending tears with rain drops.

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/14/2024 10:35:00 PM

"sadness of sky", "cries of bursting clouds" - Beautiful writing. Congratulations!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/14/2024 9:33:00 PM

showers of raindrops running merrily, such a happy image dear poet. happy writing, congratulations.

Jay Narain

Date: 7/14/2024 10:26:00 AM

Nice poem.