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06/30/24
Raindrops 2
Third Place
Contest by JCB Brul
RAIN DROPS
Rains falling :
Small droplets forming ripples
on shallow pool
in concentric circles
growing bigger and decaying
reforming recreating .
Rains drizzle.
Raindrops
fall on leaf lamina
kissed by blowing breeze
in zest and zing.
Showers of raindrops
on running river
propagating merrily.
I am sensing smelling sadness of sky
releasing in cries of bursting clouds.
I am blending tears with rain drops.
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