Rain Drops

Tumble from heavens
Crashing sliding collecting
Mud puddles are born

Nathan Bane Leccese
© All Rights Reserved 05/20/2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mckenzie Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 11:05 AM
Great Haiku I love the movement in your write! Laura :)
Fraser Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 8:34 AM
Another clever Haiku, James
Townsend Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 7:01 AM
Simple truth in a wonderful write. Great imagery in this one. Smiles from Lolita
Loveless Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 5:14 AM
Short and good imagery.
Moreno Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 1:51 AM
Love the imagery, “Mud puddles are born”...This is brilliant! And I'm going to save it with my favs. Keep on sharing, my friend. Raul
Chircop Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 11:22 PM
awesome,these raindrops from heaven,crystals falling--charma
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