Rain Droplets

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Rain droplets like memories
Drip from the low fog shrouding
Whip-poor-will sings from treasuries
Day will bring out crowding

But all in all, I must breakaway
Say_ believe in old prophets.
The Bible don't disobey.
Hear it_ in all rain droplets   

Second Ae Freislighe (aye freshly) An Irish poetry form
Written: 5/13/2023

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Valsa George

Date: 6/9/2023 8:59:00 AM

the song of raindrops and the whip-poor-will create a beautiful ambiance. Enjoyed your poem Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/9/2023 2:34:00 PM

Why, thank you, Valsa. I enjoy the song of the whip-poor-will early in the morning for a couple of hours. I think it might be calling my name. Sara

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/13/2023 8:35:00 AM

I like the serenity of your poem, Mrs Sara, Nothing like a misty rain, so fine, almost foglike. A good day to stay in bed:) Have a Happy Mother's Day sweet lady:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/13/2023 9:00:00 AM

Daniel, I still don't have this one correct. LOL..I need three syllables in a couple of places where I only have two. Whoa!! Will I ever get it correct. Thanks for the mother's day wishes. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/13/2023 8:15:00 AM

Sara, your poetry has beautiful melodic undertones. Very satisfying

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/13/2023 8:26:00 AM

Thank you, Lasaad. I think I've got it correct finally. Stretched my mental capacity to the max for some reason. I think I need to write out a diagram then write another one. Thanks for the kind review. Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2023 8:06:00 AM

People I still don't have it correctly done. LOL..I need to work on this one. Sara