Rain Day

grey sky day no chance of light
teardrop rain beats down 
thoughts now finally taking flight
smile that hides the frown.
 
melancholy dreary day
surrenders soon to dark
desperation here to stay  
leaves such a painful mark.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 30, 2012 at 7:52 PM
I like the way you express your poetry. rain can never come in dry. skat
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