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Rain Dance

We smile, it's raining Jovial in dancing joy Soaked to the skin Warm hearth welcomes us Naked to bare, towelling Goosebumps diminish Pillows, rugs, two lie Face to face, lips now caress We, attraction flows Candles flickering Undulating shadows grace Unification .

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Date: 10/30/2014 6:37:00 PM
Wow! So brilliantly penned and with such imagery....you are so so talented! A lot of vision is displayed, yet in a simply matter which makes this write a real "gem" Thank you for your kind comments! I am adding you as a favorite!
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James Fraser
Date: 10/31/2014 7:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Suzanne, firstly for the lovely comments, secondly for adding me as a favourite, much appreciated, James :)
Date: 10/20/2014 2:10:00 AM
:)!! there is a fire build up here as one reads the succeeding stanza. the last is a bomb!! may i take the permission to do something with this theme..:) rain dance?! :) if ok let me know.. thanks.. :)
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James Fraser
Date: 10/20/2014 3:49:00 PM
Olive, you may use any of my humble writes as you see fit if they happen to instill any writing ideas. Thanks kindly for your always lovely comments - James :)
Date: 10/19/2014 4:18:00 PM
stunning collection of Senryu i agree with Charmaine the last one is superb:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/19/2014 4:23:00 PM
Me too James - I went through a spell I was so demotivated by a blog i didn't write for 3 days:-( Hugs Jan xxx
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James Fraser
Date: 10/19/2014 4:21:00 PM
Many thanks Jan. Getting my Mojo back for these themes of writing - James :) xx
Date: 10/19/2014 3:46:00 PM
Sensual and beautiful senryu James..I love the collection,especially the last one!
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James Fraser
Date: 10/19/2014 3:50:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine, much appreciated, James :)