James Fraser Poet Senryu

Rain Dance

We smile, it's raining
Jovial in dancing joy
Soaked to the skin

Warm hearth welcomes us
Naked to bare, towelling
Goosebumps diminish

Pillows, rugs, two lie
Face to face, lips now caress
We, attraction flows

Candles flickering
Undulating shadows grace
Unification




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Suzanne C. Goudreau October 30, 2014 at 6:37 PM Wow! So brilliantly penned and with such imagery....you are so so talented! A lot of vision is displayed, yet in a simply matter which makes this write a real "gem" Thank you for your kind comments! I am adding you as a favorite! James Fraser October 31, 2014 at 7:22 AM Thank you so much Suzanne, firstly for the lovely comments, secondly for adding me as a favourite, much appreciated, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 20, 2014 at 2:10 AM :)!! there is a fire build up here as one reads the succeeding stanza. the last is a bomb!! may i take the permission to do something with this theme..:) rain dance?! :) if ok let me know.. thanks.. :) James Fraser October 20, 2014 at 3:49 PM Olive, you may use any of my humble writes as you see fit if they happen to instill any writing ideas. Thanks kindly for your always lovely comments - James :)

Jan Allison October 19, 2014 at 4:18 PM stunning collection of Senryu i agree with Charmaine the last one is superb:-) Hugs Jan xxx Jan Allison October 19, 2014 at 4:23 PM Me too James - I went through a spell I was so demotivated by a blog i didn't write for 3 days:-( Hugs Jan xxx James Fraser October 19, 2014 at 4:21 PM Many thanks Jan. Getting my Mojo back for these themes of writing - James :) xx

Charmaine Chircop October 19, 2014 at 3:46 PM Sensual and beautiful senryu James..I love the collection,especially the last one! James Fraser October 19, 2014 at 3:50 PM Thank you Charmaine, much appreciated, James :)