Rain Dance

rain dance window stage
white lightening on face
sleepy symphony
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Alhemaidy Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 12:59 PM
Very nice title of a delightful Haiku! Have a very nice day lovely Karen ~ AA
Jones Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 2:40 PM
Abdullah thank you and have a great weekend!
Poet Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 7:18 AM
Your use of vivid and refined imagery in such few syllables is astounding! An expression akin to a splendid choral haiku that evokes an emotional response.
Jones Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 7:39 AM
Really? Well I don’t know what I am doing lol! But they say practice makes perfect! Thanks dear poet!
Empress Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 12:02 AM
How picturesque and vivid is the way you’ve painted imagery in few syllables! Like a beautiful symphonic haiku that would touch any readers soul! I lov it! Pleasure always reading your work. Keep sharing
Jones Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 12:06 AM
Thanks Inky! I’m practicing so not sure I hit the form!
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