Rain Dance

rain dance window stage white lightening on face sleepy symphony

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 1/13/2024 12:59:00 PM

Very nice title of a delightful Haiku! Have a very nice day lovely Karen ~ AA

Karen Jones
Date: 1/13/2024 2:40:00 PM

Abdullah thank you and have a great weekend!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/10/2024 10:08:00 AM

loved this Haiku...love sleeping during rainy symphonies outside my windows. Lovely creation. Have a splendid day, Sara

Karen Jones
Date: 1/10/2024 10:39:00 AM

Thanks for telling me it is indeed a haiku. I wasn’t sure since I mentioned face. Appreciate the compliment have an awesome day as well! Hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/9/2024 7:18:00 AM

Your use of vivid and refined imagery in such few syllables is astounding! An expression akin to a splendid choral haiku that evokes an emotional response.

Karen Jones
Date: 1/9/2024 7:39:00 AM

Really? Well I don’t know what I am doing lol! But they say practice makes perfect! Thanks dear poet!

Ink Empress

Date: 1/9/2024 12:02:00 AM

How picturesque and vivid is the way you’ve painted imagery in few syllables! Like a beautiful symphonic haiku that would touch any readers soul! I lov it! Pleasure always reading your work. Keep sharing

Karen Jones
Date: 1/9/2024 12:06:00 AM

Thanks Inky! I’m practicing so not sure I hit the form!