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Rain Dance

It's a special rain dance,
most do not know about
and all are invited
but please leave fears behind,
that heart be delighted!

It's a special rain dance,
that’s ushered in silence,
where we're bathed in nectar
borne by bliss magnetism,
piercing every vector!

It's a special rain dance,
scented with the fragrance
of love in all its hues,
pulsating within form,
as ignition renews!

It's a special rain dance
only for pure of heart,
as dew drops of delight
transforms our mind-body,
into God's living light!

11-November-2022

Inspiring Rainy Days Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Sotto Poet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kaufman Avatar
November 26, 2022 at 4:08 AM
such a lovely write, the imagery is awesome..belated congrats. Nancy
Seeker Avatar
November 26, 2022 at 4:23 AM
Thank you, Nancy ~ so happy these words resonate in your heart
Gasun Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 6:12 AM
Such a stunning write my dear friend US. I love every raindance's stanza of your poem a lot especially the last one. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations for a well-deserved first place win! Hugs. God bless you always and your writings.
Seeker Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 7:08 AM
Thank you, Len. I’m so happy these words resonate
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 10:50 AM
- Here I had to dance often ... we have many rainy days throughout the year :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest, U.S. :) -
Seeker Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 7:06 AM
Thank you, Sunshine! :)
Roper Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 11:21 PM
Congratulation on your awesome win with this great imagery and feelings. This reminded me when my oldest came to visit from Arizona . It started raining and she ran out and danced in the rain. Many blessing my friend
Seeker Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 3:51 AM
Thank you, Eve. :)
Poet Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 2:27 PM
Congratulations on taking first place in my contest. You created such beautiful poetry, full of analogies and lovely rhymes.
Seeker Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 5:50 PM
Thank you, SP!
Gorelick Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 12:57 PM
A divine endeavor I believe I 'd like to pursue.
Seeker Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 4:23 PM
Go ahead Robert, nothing is stopping us except conditioned belief, desire and fear
Daniel Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 11:39 PM
This is a nice one, US:)
Seeker Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 11:40 PM
Thank you, Jo :)
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