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Rain Dance

the trees danced in the 

    wind as they were
   
       bathed by the rain~

Copyright © Deneen White | Year Posted 2008

imaginationintrospectionnaturehaiku

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Patricia Langston-Moran

August 30, 2008 at 6:27 PM

Deneen. Thank you again for your comments about "Twighlight." Your poetry is so packed with thought and expressed with such concise power. I can't do this...anyway, again. thanks for the kind words. Your letter about "Lost Love" brought tears to my eyes...thank you. You don't stop loving a person after 23 years.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

August 29, 2008 at 6:19 AM

Summer rain refreshes. God Bless, D-Nyce. Vince

Joseph Spence Sr

August 27, 2008 at 8:39 PM

This is just wonderful. I used to dance in the rain a long time ago. I can see the imagery quite clearly. Great job! ~Joseph

August 27, 2008 at 1:08 PM

Great observation , D-nyce... The trees being bathed by a " shower "..... Write onnnnnnn....

Kristin Reynolds

August 27, 2008 at 3:31 AM

and oh, what an inpiring dance it is. LOove the imagry here, well done, blessings, Kristin

August 26, 2008 at 7:39 PM

Excellent haiku. Can smell the rain and feel the atmosphere. Well done! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

August 26, 2008 at 5:27 PM

What a lovely scene this makes! Trees, wet and dancing!! Nice haiku!! Best Wishes...Carrie

August 26, 2008 at 4:39 PM

beautiful and exact imagery of natures power within so few words, very well placed words,,blessings..Cecil

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