Rain Box

Maybe I can earn The golden star, silver moon To work on the ruby senses Harbor no lost lies Keeping no cynical shine Opening rain box Russell Sivey

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 1/9/2016 4:22:00 AM

I like the mystical suspense pulsating in your verse! Congrats, Russell, for being featured in the Poetry Soup home page!! ;-)

Jack Horne

Date: 11/10/2011 10:54:00 AM

I'm reading opening the rain box as crying? Powerful piece, Russell

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/6/2011 4:05:00 PM

Cynical shine...is one amazing line. Work the magic!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/3/2011 12:54:00 AM

This is such an awesome piece of poetry! Thank you for sharing! Always, Laura

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/2/2011 12:54:00 PM

Very thought provoking, Russell. I could see the "rain box" as tears or even as something similar to Pandora's box. Intriguing write! Wanted also to thank you for my place in your contest. I am a fisherwoman and determine when to fish by the moon's cycles. Love, Carolyn

Ian D. Campbell

Date: 11/2/2011 12:49:00 PM

The first poem I read today worth reading. Bravo!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/2/2011 9:45:00 AM

lovely words of wishing with dynamic gems for analogies Russell.. thankxx so very much for my win in your Moon contest ..it was a joy to create new poetry for u luv..