Rain At Night

Late at night
when the rain falls
we sleep as if we are dead.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Joe Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 11:39 AM
This reads as if the voice has English as a second language and it make for an interesting post. I like the contrast that is captured well in this eccellently balanced poem. Just one little point: I think you should take out the commas.
Adeite Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 6:35 AM
wonderful write with an interesting story, you are such a creative writer... keep the flag flying... keep sharing you thoughts here... great you! adeleke
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