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Rain At Night

Late at night when the rain falls we sleep as if we are dead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/25/2009 11:39:00 AM
This reads as if the voice has English as a second language and it make for an interesting post. I like the contrast that is captured well in this eccellently balanced poem. Just one little point: I think you should take out the commas.
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Date: 7/24/2009 6:35:00 AM
wonderful write with an interesting story, you are such a creative writer... keep the flag flying... keep sharing you thoughts here... great you! adeleke
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