Rain and Sun

The rain fell down hard yesterday. 
 Did Your anger provoke that display? 
 Did I do something especially terrible? 
 The weight of sin is quite unbearable. 
 Does the pounding, relentless rain 
 fall upon the righteous the same? 
   
 The sun shines today so freely. 
 Are You quite pleased with me? 
 Or are these the same rays that touch the evil? 
 Is Your grace so great to conquer the devil? 
 You woo sinners with gifts small and great. 
 You love us to death, crucifying hate. 
   
 Rain or sun? 
 What have we done? 
 Not of our merit, 
 but by Your Son. 
   
 Rain and sun are both gifts. 
 It's just a matter of perception shifts. 
 Both are needed to survive. 
 Lo, and behold, when both collide! 
 Put them together, witness a promise. 
 The sun through the rain isn't hard to miss. 
 Look at the sky. Smile as it hits. 
 With childlike innocence, a rainbow sits!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 4:11 PM
Very good poem; well presented...and the last stanza is so full of hope and promise! /x/ paul
Phookan Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 8:33 AM
This reads so good! Congrats Juliet on a fine write and win! hugs...
Ligon Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 10:50 AM
Thanks, gautami!
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February 12, 2014 at 11:34 AM
Enjoyed this heart enlivening winner Juliet.. Congrats..'
Ligon Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 10:49 AM
Thanks, Joe!
Mehta Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 9:08 AM
Enjoyed the poem and congrats on the win, juliet
Ligon Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 10:49 AM
Thanks, Dr!
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February 12, 2014 at 3:15 AM
- Another contest sponsored by: Giorgio V. - "Impress me IV" - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM,JULIET - ENJOYABLE TO READ YOURS AND A PLEASURE TO PARTICIPATE :))) - Anne-Lise :)
Ligon Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 10:49 AM
Thanks, Anne Lise!
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February 2, 2014 at 12:07 PM
Oh wow I love the questions you ask, they make the poem flow and give it some umf! Great write, I love it! fantastically written! :)
Ligon Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 10:49 AM
Thanks, Chris!
Horsch Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 7:07 AM
I like it when someone writes about the rain and the sun and you captured it perfectly. Nice job Juliet.....Hugs.....Roger
Ligon Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 10:49 AM
Thanks, Roger!
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