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Rain and Ducks

Rain drops fall softy
each splashing drop forms circles
which join into puddles

Ducks splash with great glee
flapping wings causing droplets
that reflect rainbows

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Robin Davis

Date: 5/15/2014 9:32:00 PM

Shadow This is so cute and sweet. Rainbows, ducks, puddles, and fun. what could be better. Thank you for the nice comment on my Garden poem.

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/12/2013 12:21:00 PM

IReally like seeing ducks floating along Shadow, Pleased to have read this and thanks for your visit..'

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/14/2013 8:46:00 AM

hi Joe an ty dear man ducks are often so funny also ty for time reading and lovely review Shadow x smile

David Williams

Date: 10/12/2013 2:04:00 AM

Shadow the link between the two haiku's are very seamless, they are very well thought out, excellent...David

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/12/2013 6:33:00 AM

hi David and Ty much appreciated Shadow x smile

Jack Horne

Date: 10/11/2013 2:36:00 PM

love these - thanks for letting me work with Russell and Andrea in your contest : )

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/11/2013 2:40:00 PM

hi Jack I hope you enjoyed it I think working with another poet produces wonderful poems the standard was very high Ty for enjoying these Shadow x smile