Rain

Written about a girl named,,,,,Rain



I see your subtle cloud..on the horizon
You whisper...there's no cause for alarm
But I've learned, you delight in surprising....
'Cause every time you come around...
You bring a storm....

So Rain...You're not welcome here!
I sure don't need your doubts and fears
Go deal your misery down memory lane
Be the tears in the eye of a hurricane
'Cause Rain, Rain, Rain......
You're not welcome here!

You want me to believe all your sweet lies
'Bout how a little Rain can make love grow
But after drowning in all your sorrow
A broken heart is all.....
I'll have to show

So Rain...You're not welcome here!
I sure don't need your doubts and fears
Go deal your misery down memory lane
Be the tears in the eye of a hurricane
'Cause  Rain, Rain, Rain......
You're not welcome here!


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Date: 2/19/2017 1:35:00 PM
- Really great writte, Chuck - A song to rain ... a touching song - I listen for the melody .... beautiful - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 2/19/2017 2:04:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, Your comments are so appreciated and your poetry speaks volumes! My best to you, chuck
Date: 2/2/2017 2:37:00 PM
I like this one Chuck!! I could hear it!!;) Big Hugggs!! Deb
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 2/2/2017 4:45:00 PM
Thanks so much Deb. My best, chuck
Date: 1/20/2017 6:13:00 AM
What an unusual name and I love your interpretation of it in your lyrics - would love to hear the vocals and music to this one chuck. I heard of a girl called 'storm' named after a character in a book:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 1/20/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thanks so much Jan. I am working on getting some tunes uploaded. I love the name Storm! I think you have inspired me. My best to you and yours. Hugs, chuck
Date: 1/9/2017 5:28:00 PM
The girl is really named Rain? How interesting. I love how you portrayed this relationship with all the imagery. Did you put it to music? Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 1/11/2017 12:03:00 PM
Thanks Juli, Yes it has been put to music. I used a girl to sing it. thought it would be more commercial . My publishers were not real excited, so on to another song maybe about Wind or Snow??? What do you suggest?? Love, Chuck
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