Afzal Nusker Poet Verse

Rain

Rolling down the rooftop,
ruffling by my glass pane,
rippling on the sill like
rhyming sound of a cool
rapper's lyrics in a
rhythmic beat of a drum.
Rain is such a marvel!


08/13/2016

Note : For the contest (RAIN) by Eve Roper.
         *Placed First*
Form of the poem is Pleiades. The title is described in 7 lines consisting of 6 syllables in each line and every line also starts with the same letter as of the title's first letter.

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Andrea Dietrich January 5, 2017 at 9:55 PM this is one of the best pleiades I have ever read. I'm gonna FAVE this one!! Afzal Nusker January 7, 2017 at 6:31 AM Thank you, Andrea. I am so glad you liked it.

Kim Rodrigues September 4, 2016 at 11:59 AM Very nice! Afzal Nusker September 5, 2016 at 2:07 AM Thank you, Kim.

Charlie Smith August 21, 2016 at 8:35 AM Most interesting form. I've only tried it once. (Asea) Congratulations on your success. Afzal Nusker August 24, 2016 at 3:55 AM Thankx, Charlie...I totally agree with u, the form is quite interesting & not easy too, but I enjoy writing in this form very much.

DM Babbit August 17, 2016 at 5:53 AM Short, direct and sweetly played. Congrats. Afzal Nusker August 17, 2016 at 11:29 AM Thanx for stopping by and thank you very much for the compliment.

Sara Chansarkar August 16, 2016 at 10:32 AM Lovely poem Afzal,congrats! Afzal Nusker August 16, 2016 at 11:56 AM Thank you, Sara. :-)

John Hamilton August 16, 2016 at 6:40 AM Really well done Afzal, enjoyed your pleiades very much. Congrats on the win! Afzal Nusker August 16, 2016 at 7:15 AM Thank you very much, John. I really appreciate your kind words.

Joseph May August 16, 2016 at 5:11 AM Congrats on a great win Afzal Afzal Nusker August 16, 2016 at 7:13 AM Thank you, Joseph.

Jean Murray August 16, 2016 at 4:03 AM For being so new to Poetrysoup, you are such a marvel Afzal. Welcome and well done to get to number one. Afzal Nusker August 16, 2016 at 7:11 AM Thanx for your kind words, Jean.

Eve Roper August 15, 2016 at 5:11 PM Congratulations on your win, Afzal ! Hug Eve Eve Roper August 16, 2016 at 8:39 AM Welcome,Afzal, to Soup, your poem said so much in such a few words "Excellent" :-) Afzal Nusker August 15, 2016 at 10:38 PM Thank you very much, Eve. It's really overwhelming for me to receive so much appreciation and love from you guys. I mean i am new to the community and yet you guys are supporting me so much. I am really grateful!

Jan Allison August 15, 2016 at 5:00 PM Congrats Afzal:-) hugs Jan xx Afzal Nusker August 15, 2016 at 10:40 PM Thank you very much, Jan. :~))

Beautiful Scars August 15, 2016 at 4:42 PM Afzal, congrats on your top placement in the Rain contest! :)-luloo Afzal Nusker August 15, 2016 at 10:41 PM Thanx, Laura. :-)

Jan Allison August 13, 2016 at 8:34 AM This is lovely for the rain contest and could possibly be used in a future contest :-) good luck Afzal:-) hugs Jan xx Afzal Nusker August 13, 2016 at 9:15 AM Thanx Jan. :-)