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The sky sheds tears and rain drops fall. The pleasant sound of subsiding rain each drop an offering from heaven. Each drop creates the perfect circle A Lilliputian tsunami created from just rain. Natures metronome in over drive drip drop drip drop the ticking of natures life clock. Each drop recycled tears of all the sadness done on earth.

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Date: 8/14/2016 3:18:00 PM
Wonderful metaphor poem Stephen - great write for the contest:-) good luck:-) hugs jan xx7
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/15/2016 1:48:00 PM
cheers jan , my poetic licence went of on one stephen
Date: 8/14/2016 9:57:00 AM
wow, this is a great metaphor poem, Stephen!!
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Date: 8/15/2016 1:49:00 PM
many thanks andrea hope the sponsor likes it glad you do stephen
Date: 8/11/2016 10:17:00 PM
Love the insight and wisdom in those drip drops of rain! :)
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/12/2016 2:42:00 AM
lol : oh my most famous line of poetry might might pen a poem just with drip in it and end with a plop as the volta :-) stephen
Date: 8/11/2016 11:57:00 AM
what a pleasant way to describe rain.., greeat'drip, drip' lines, stephen.. huggs
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Date: 8/11/2016 3:57:00 PM
lol it was a tuffy could have been plop lol
Date: 8/11/2016 7:22:00 AM
I like the line,"Lilliputian tsunami..." Some very unique analogies here Stephen. I love the originality.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/11/2016 7:53:00 AM
Lilliputian tsunami not seen very often many thanks

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