Rain

Rain downpour wash away the long dry spell Earth's dull without a pot of gold rainbow Drought is approaching nearing our front door life on the line don't delay hurry Rain Come I smell heat lifting living sustained Dancing in the wet with a humble cry *** CONTEST: Triple Tetractys 2 SPONSOR: Eve Roper Date: July 19th 2016

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2016 2:52:00 PM

Your Triple Tetractys poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Liz Ward
Date: 7/27/2016 2:59:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments Sara. Best wishes, Liz

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2016 5:49:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Liz

Liz Ward
Date: 7/23/2016 12:24:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. Best wishes, Liz

Jan Allison

Date: 7/20/2016 1:38:00 PM

We moan about the amount of rain we get in the UK but where would we be without our precious raindrops:-) good luck in the contest Liz:-) hugs Jan xx

Liz Ward
Date: 7/20/2016 11:58:00 PM

Thank you for your encouragement Jan. This is my first poetry contest. Best wishes, Liz