Rain

The flashy, thunderous announcement
of your unexpected visit on the hot summer day
scares the crap out of the pigeons in the square -
cannoning them into the air -
                                    but soon 
they are diving and gliding as they discover 
that you are cool as you high-heel dance
the tarry breath out of tired and dusty roads.

But in the grasses of the park the sudden deluge
causes workers to abandon their burdens, and confusedly
hasten to save nappied babies and the queendom from flooding.

The sun worshippers temporarily abandon their religion
as they unbow their heads for a sparkling new baptism
but as their fiery god reappears, you take flight,
confetting the air with your one-word calling card:
                           petrichor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Goodside Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 12:30 PM
Mr. De La Croes. Very nice imagery and I learned a new word today... 'Petrichor'. Thanks, Donn ___
De La Croes Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 1:09 PM
Dear Donn, You cannot imagine my joy when I saw your name on the list of new poems. I became inactive on the site 3 years ago, and have returned recently. Too be able to see your work again, is such an honor. Thanks for your kind comments. David
Gupta Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 5:53 AM
Am riveted by the words leading from image to image and the underlying beauty...
De La Croes Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 7:18 AM
Thank you, Probir. I appreciate your visit and comments. Go well, David
Daniel Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 4:03 AM
Lovely write packed with such a lot of action:)
De La Croes Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 5:14 AM
Thank you, Jo, I appreciate your visit and comments. Cheers, David
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