Rain

I closed my eyes and gave thanks.
At last the rain was falling 
washing the dirt off my face
running down my cheeks 
in tiny river beds
carved by my tears. 

l imagined I looked like a painting
of a harlequin with a sad frown
Not much in thirteen years to make me smile.
Found a baby bird once, but he crushed it to death
cursed him under my breath
with words I hear him scream at me.
I won't think about him
Not yet        

Inhaling the petrichor of moss roses
pummeled by rain-releasing their sweet perfume 
reminds me of something l almost forgot 
something to take the sting from the pain
not clear enough in memory for me to recall 
Not yet         Not yet

Hope it rains all day and long into the night
I need it to disguise my tears.
He hates it when I cry
it makes him hurt me more.
His thunder roars when he sees fear
his hand strikes me. 
Behind the veil of darkness
in our hovel near the river
his storm will rain on me-when it gets dark.

The sun is weakening and soon it will set
but           not           yet   


6/8/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/6/2016 8:53:00 AM
Loved it Marti! The poem takes you somewhere else..
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Date: 7/6/2016 8:37:00 AM
Congrats Marti, for your top placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/6/2016 4:59:00 AM
Wonderful write, Marti:) Congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 7/5/2016 2:35:00 PM
Yes........this is wonderful poetry !! Congratulations to you Marti ! I love this one!
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Date: 7/5/2016 12:11:00 PM
btw, if you have time, I posted an audio of your poem in my blog. I hope that it's ok if I did, and that I did some justice to it. Thank you again for entering my contest :)!
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Date: 7/5/2016 12:09:00 PM
Big congrats to you Marti for your 2nd place win! Your poem had this blend of mystery & sadness, totally intriguing me. I somehow pictured this as some sort of movie in my head and a certain background story came to mind. What I really enjoyed about your engaging piece was of how you employed the phrase, "not yet". I think you used this wonderfully, especially to set the tone. I really enjoyed reading this, and can't help but hope that the sun didn't set. I hope this wow poem gets more reads!
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