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Rain

Rain has rinsed the night of color
and falls with some restraint
A day designed to say goodbye
cannot deny the scent of grief

It's no wonder sleepless nights prevail
upon the hint of a summer storms
as if to keep the heart alive
and smooth the day before our eyes 

Just slight enough to temper dark
To let us swim into the night
with something new that isn't yet
quite defined to understand

Enough to litter sidewalks, 
gutters, eaves. To leave a trace
of sailing leaves, confetti trails
To veil the past and distant hills
beneath the somber sky

Slanted silver catches light
washing tremors from the wind
A petrichor of sweet perfume
blooms again to sweeten earth
and birth a stream of memories

As we woke to dread the day,  
somehow, we were not surprised, 
to hear the sound of rain again
She always said,  a gentle rain
will come to soothe the earth and sky
to quench the soul, restore the heart
with colors of the afterlife

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6/7/16
For "Contest: Rain, Rain Come My Way"
Sponsored by binibining P.INk
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Daniel Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 5:19 AM
Congratulations on your win, Carrie:) Rain does bring memories and don't know why but many times it is of those who were very close to us and now are no more...
K. Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 1:07 PM
Hi Carrie :)! Big congrats on your win! By some miracle, I was able to put in 11 winners, and I am so glad this happened! Your poem made me wonder as to who "she" was , and that intrigued me. I am thinking could be a grandmother? My favorite stanza is the 4th, for me rain was so alive there. Thank you so much for entering my contest :)!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 7:59 PM
I love the rain and your poem expresses the beauty of it. I hope to see this in the top winners Carrie. #7 ; )
Smith Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 1:29 PM
"To quench the soul, restore the heart", Great line. Best wishes in the contest...
Mark Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Ok, I like each stanza on its own merit, and you have a way of saying " simple" beautifully, but it has me zigzaging on the spot ? the " us" then the " she" are leaving me directionless, ...and it does lean towards lengthy, .... I feel this could have been shorter, and perhaps personalised has a " rain memory" ....Ian
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