Rain

my parched eyes watch torrents of rain 
lashing the glass windows
of my chic office on the seventeenth floor
can't hear the tinkling of drops 
or rumbling of clouds though
the sound obscured by engineered acoustics

I shut my eyes and it comes singing to me-
the sound of dripping roof of my childhood home
the resonant chorus insinuates the clamor inside.
how I want to run amok in the rain outside these walls!
how my expensive suit and svelte heels stifle my desire!
I ache and pine, a bird with clipped wings
captive in a golden cage.

rain, rain-I pray, do me a favor today
wash away my sagacity and wise adulthood
reverse the metamorphosis I’ve been through
seep into my locked pores
free out the innocent child I was once
lick my tired hands
to once more transform scraps of paper into boats
cleanse my eyes of ambition 
effulge the effervescent joy and energy
dilute my blood now viscous
into frothy ebullience tingling my veins
tousle and crush my silk parasol
soak me head to toe in sky’s curative water instead
drain away the worldly perfumes and essence
and fill my nostrils with pure petrichor.

Written on 06/04/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 3:31 PM
such lovely imagery and great lines Sara congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 10:04 PM
Beautiful imagery, Sara. Congratulations on your win in the 'rain' contest. Hugs, Sandra
Chansarkar Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 11:56 AM
Thanks Sandra,your poem was wonderful too!
Roper Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 6:18 PM
Congratulations on your win,Sara ! Hug Eve
Chansarkar Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 11:55 AM
Thanks a lot Eve!
Scars Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 5:08 PM
Sara, congrats on your placement in the Rain contest :)-luloo
Chansarkar Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 11:55 AM
Hey Laura,I loved your Rain poem too,thanks!
Gupta Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 10:06 PM
Wonderful poem to portray the subconscious ....and universal subconscious... enjoyed reading...
Chansarkar Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 12:44 PM
Thanks Probir!
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