Connie Marcum Wong Poet Rhyme

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Rain

I love to feel the
wind on my face, 
bask in the warmth
of the sun’s embrace;
But as light misty rain
touches my skin
in divine delight 
I go within...

The wind becomes 
an internal force.
The sun enters my heart
on its warm course, 
But rain endeavors
to keep me whole
and helps to sustain
my very soul. 

© Connie Marcum Wong

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Edlynn Nau May 28, 2016 at 5:40 PM Thank you for the bit of beauty in my day! Sunlight and Water. . . Explaining all of life. You've brought out what a treasure the liquid gold is here with this delightful observation. Love this! Connie Marcum Wong May 28, 2016 at 9:33 PM I have always loved rain becauses it cleanses the earth and everything. Thank you much Edlynn. ; )

Lindsay Laurie May 9, 2016 at 8:56 PM Hello Connie ... lovely Connie. There is nothing like the smell of rain after a dry period - Lindsay Connie Marcum Wong May 9, 2016 at 10:46 PM I agree Lindsay. Thank you for visiting my rain. ; )

CayCay Godwin May 6, 2016 at 10:06 PM I love this sweet poem - it is an absolute delight! CayCay

The Grahamburglar May 6, 2016 at 2:16 PM I love the flow and rhyme of this one. Very expressive and well written. This is an easy 7 from me. -G The Grahamburglar May 6, 2016 at 2:17 PM After reading this through a few times...I decided it needs to be on my fave list. ;)

Paul Schneiter May 5, 2016 at 10:20 PM Absolutely lovely--the flow, the rhyme, the message. Beautifully done. I love it! hugs x x x

Richard Lamoureux April 30, 2016 at 6:44 PM Now that's a windy place worth while visiting. Connie Marcum Wong April 30, 2016 at 11:40 PM Thank you Richard. ; )

Old Man Emu April 30, 2016 at 3:58 AM My second visit to this poem. Even better this time around. I really like it Connie. Cheers Craig Connie Marcum Wong April 30, 2016 at 11:41 PM Thank you very much Craig. I truly appreciate that! ; )

Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2016 at 7:37 AM - Beautifully written, Connie ..... although we here in Norway have too much rain :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Connie Marcum Wong April 30, 2016 at 11:43 PM Thank you very much Sun.

Nette Onclaud April 28, 2016 at 4:46 PM how gentle is your melody on rain.. just did one on the same subject but yours is much better... joyful read, connie.. huggs Connie Marcum Wong April 30, 2016 at 11:44 PM I loved yours Nette. Thank you! ; )

Paul Callus April 28, 2016 at 11:21 AM Beautiful....my type of poem! I love the rain, too, as long it does not turn into floods! When I lived with my grandparents I was fascinated by the rain pattering on the roof and the wind whistling round the turret of the windmill. ~ Regards // paul Connie Marcum Wong May 1, 2016 at 1:16 AM Oh thank you very much Paul. It is so refreshing. ; )

James Inman April 28, 2016 at 10:29 AM How beautiful is a gentle rain on a warm spring day and how nature stirs our inner emotions. You have captured it beautifully Connie. Connie Marcum Wong May 1, 2016 at 1:19 AM Thank you very much James. ; )

Joanna Daniel April 28, 2016 at 7:24 AM I love to see the rain but not get drenched in it:) amazing write:) Connie Marcum Wong May 1, 2016 at 1:22 AM Thank you Jo. It is warm here and I almost never even use an umbrella. ; )

Ravi Sathasivam April 28, 2016 at 6:41 AM I do love rain. Amazing imagery write and well penned. Enjoyed reading it. TFS Connie Marcum Wong May 1, 2016 at 1:24 AM Thank you Ravi. I always enjoy your visits. ; )

Eileen Manassian April 27, 2016 at 3:24 PM :) I am also a lover of rain, dear Connie. This was a delightful and refreshing write. Hugs Connie Marcum Wong April 27, 2016 at 4:25 PM I appreciate that Eileen. I feel rain is cleansing the outside as well as the inside. Thank you my friend. ; )

Old Man Emu April 27, 2016 at 2:44 PM Great poem Connie, enjoyed reading this in the early morning before I exit the house to another day without rain. Regards, Craig Connie Marcum Wong April 27, 2016 at 4:34 PM Rain is certainly a blessing on this earth and I love the songs it sings. Thank you very much Craig. I hope you have a great day! ; )

Winged Warrior April 27, 2016 at 8:54 AM Beautifully done Connie...your are a magician with words...I love your rain...god bless...^WW^ Connie Marcum Wong April 27, 2016 at 1:26 PM Thank you WW. What a lovely comment to wake up to. Blessings to you too, Connie ; )

Brian Cecil April 27, 2016 at 6:02 AM I do like a good walk in the rain. It's like connecting with nature, herself. Connie Marcum Wong April 27, 2016 at 1:29 PM Our tropical rain is warm and refreshing as is our trade winds and both are loved by me. I agree Brian, connecting with nature. Thank you very much for your visit. ; )

Jan Allison April 27, 2016 at 3:30 AM oh such amazing imagery Connie - I could almost feel the rain on my face reading your wonderful words and I love the image - truly beautiful write my friend:-) hugs Jan xx7 Connie Marcum Wong April 27, 2016 at 2:00 PM Thank you for such a lovely compliment Jan. We welcome the warm rain and trade winds here. Have a great night, It is my morning. Cheers, Connie ; )