Rain

I wish she was a human She is like an angel With a magic wand and pure white feathery wings Visits me when I am lost When I don’t care to cherish the memories, the most. With a bag full of gifts, she comes Leaving behind some forgotten melodies, she leaves. Sometimes it’s a melancholy Other times it can be a yearning To dig the past, most of the times All total, I am in bliss, in her presence. She embraces me close to her chest Like a mom, lest I run away. She cradles me in her lap For that’s the best I can hope To conjure up the past To hum the forgotten melodies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 4:28 AM
- This is so beautiful Remnants of Some Silly Experiences, I love poem about angels .... even in rain :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 10:36 AM
You are wonderful angel...love and peace..thank you :))
Mcdaid Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 8:31 PM
this piece is so sweet
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 8:50 PM
thank you my sweet friend :)) God bless
Orban Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 9:20 PM
What I love about this free verse is the line "when I dont care to cherish the memories" That is an amazing line.. many people love to write about the past, wail about the past, regret the past, be nostalgic about the past and we poets are known for reminiscing the past--but I love that forgetting is embraced and the Nature rain specifically brings deliverance. Cheers to you.
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 12:47 AM
Thank you Toni for this wonderful comment..highly appreciated..wishing you a very happy christmas..love and peace to you my friend..:))
Spagnola Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 11:29 AM
Your write is so delicately sad...:), jill
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 11:34 AM
Sing along..the forgotten melodies..let us share some sweet hymns..Thank you jill for your time..love and peace..
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