Rain

The sky’s deep blue eyes
Wounded by the wandering storm
Sheds the white mucus
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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October 7, 2009 at 2:00 AM
AWESOME haiku, dear Oluwaseun. lainie
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September 28, 2008 at 1:56 PM
Vivid imagery carries your thoughts in this one. Nice use of this concise form. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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