Rain

Rain Translucent orbs fell Surreptitiously out of Heaven’s opened door Canvassing arid landscapes With liquid condensation

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Martin Braun

Date: 8/30/2023 6:09:00 PM

Nicely done. I like the word "orbs." It's a fun word... orb.

Valerie Staton
Date: 8/30/2023 8:38:00 PM

Thank you Martin. I'm thrilled you like my use of the word "orbs" - :)

Valerie Staton

Date: 2/3/2018 7:09:00 AM

Thinking about making into poetry art. Great imagery.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2014 10:42:00 PM

Very nicely done!

Valerie Staton
Date: 10/18/2014 1:36:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, I really appreciate your kind words. I enjoy your work as well :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/17/2014 2:50:00 AM

- A great rainy day,Valerie ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Valerie Staton
Date: 10/18/2014 1:31:00 PM

Thanks, that means a lot to me coming from such a talented poet.