Rain

Rain

Translucent orbs fell
Surreptitiously out of 
Heaven’s opened door 
Canvassing arid landscapes
With liquid condensation
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Braun Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 6:09 PM
Nicely done. I like the word "orbs." It's a fun word... orb.
Staton Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 8:38 PM
Thank you Martin. I'm thrilled you like my use of the word "orbs" - :)
Staton Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 7:09 AM
Thinking about making into poetry art. Great imagery.
Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 10:42 PM
Very nicely done!
Staton Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 1:36 PM
Thanks Andrea, I really appreciate your kind words. I enjoy your work as well :)
Andresen Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 2:50 AM
- A great rainy day,Valerie ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Staton Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 1:31 PM
Thanks, that means a lot to me coming from such a talented poet.
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