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Acid in the rain Chances it won't heal again Leaves our earth in pain 09.17.2014 Contest: Creative Haiku Charlotte Puddifoot

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Charlene Wilcox

Date: 9/19/2014 8:37:00 PM

Brenda Iwill say You have potential and You should keep writing because Everything You have to say is just as important as the next Person..Express Always and keep writing no matter what...I too enjoyed seeing Your Entry...Nice write..

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/20/2014 8:36:00 AM

Thank you very much Charlene. I'm glad you stopped by.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2014 10:20:00 PM

Sadly, this is more common than ever on our earth now. Good luck in the contest, Brenda. I enjoyed seeing your entry.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/19/2014 7:48:00 AM

Thanks Andrea.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2014 10:08:00 AM

Maybe it is going to get better..I hope so for the earth's sake..Way to go for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/19/2014 7:47:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by Sara and for the compliment.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2014 3:08:00 AM

- Great haiku !!! - I wish the best of luck in the contest Brenda! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/18/2014 7:10:00 AM

Thank you Anne Lise

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/18/2014 2:43:00 AM

There is much truth in these well placed words. Using my Questionku form, your poem inspires the following poem. "acid rains down/ flowers withering/ does the planet feel pain?"

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/18/2014 7:12:00 AM

Never heard this before but yes very similar.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/18/2014 1:36:00 AM

Oh so so clever Brenda I think this will do well for you! Hugs Jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/18/2014 7:10:00 AM

Thank you Jan. You are. True friend.