Rain

Acid in the rain
           Chances it won't heal again
              Leaves our earth in pain 



09.17.2014
Contest: Creative Haiku 
Charlotte Puddifoot

earthenvironmenthurtnaturerainhaiku

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Charlene Wilcox

September 19, 2014 at 8:37 PM

Brenda Iwill say You have potential and You should keep writing because Everything You have to say is just as important as the next Person..Express Always and keep writing no matter what...I too enjoyed seeing Your Entry...Nice write..

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 20, 2014 at 8:36 AM

Thank you very much Charlene. I'm glad you stopped by.

Andrea Dietrich

September 18, 2014 at 10:20 PM

Sadly, this is more common than ever on our earth now. Good luck in the contest, Brenda. I enjoyed seeing your entry.

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 19, 2014 at 7:48 AM

Thanks Andrea.

Sara Kendrick

September 18, 2014 at 10:08 AM

Maybe it is going to get better..I hope so for the earth's sake..Way to go for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 19, 2014 at 7:47 AM

Thanks for stopping by Sara and for the compliment.

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 18, 2014 at 3:08 AM

- Great haiku !!! - I wish the best of luck in the contest Brenda! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 18, 2014 at 7:10 AM

Thank you Anne Lise

Richard Lamoureux

September 18, 2014 at 2:43 AM

There is much truth in these well placed words. Using my Questionku form, your poem inspires the following poem. "acid rains down/ flowers withering/ does the planet feel pain?"

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 18, 2014 at 7:12 AM

Never heard this before but yes very similar.