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Rain

                    
                    Acid in the rain
           Chances it won't heal again
              Leaves our earth in pain 



09.17.2014
Contest: Creative Haiku 
Charlotte Puddifoot

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/19/2014 8:37:00 PM
Brenda Iwill say You have potential and You should keep writing because Everything You have to say is just as important as the next Person..Express Always and keep writing no matter what...I too enjoyed seeing Your Entry...Nice write..
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/20/2014 8:36:00 AM
Thank you very much Charlene. I'm glad you stopped by.
Date: 9/18/2014 10:20:00 PM
Sadly, this is more common than ever on our earth now. Good luck in the contest, Brenda. I enjoyed seeing your entry.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/19/2014 7:48:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 9/18/2014 10:08:00 AM
Maybe it is going to get better..I hope so for the earth's sake..Way to go for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/19/2014 7:47:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Sara and for the compliment.
Date: 9/18/2014 3:08:00 AM
- Great haiku !!! - I wish the best of luck in the contest Brenda! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/18/2014 7:10:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise
Date: 9/18/2014 2:43:00 AM
There is much truth in these well placed words. Using my Questionku form, your poem inspires the following poem. "acid rains down/ flowers withering/ does the planet feel pain?"
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/18/2014 7:12:00 AM
Never heard this before but yes very similar.
Date: 9/18/2014 1:36:00 AM
Oh so so clever Brenda I think this will do well for you! Hugs Jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/18/2014 7:10:00 AM
Thank you Jan. You are. True friend.