Rain

The daylight's darkness drops again,
The wind looses its controlling brain
And the dust protest in Peaceful anger
Thunder whispers banger
Hopeless than a motioned train
A droplet of a comic tragic rain!
Humans' legs on the race, 
So not to miss the trace,
As roofs struggle space of air
For roofs know not who erred 
The trees forced to bow
leting green and yellow pride down, 
Finally, heaven open it's doors,
As sky looses it's keys to doors
Now the earth is drowning 
Like the inhabitants are sorrowing.
But we may do without rain
But not water. Is water not rain?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 31, 2014 at 8:19 AM
Thank you Fredinard, for replying to my comment... have a nice day
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May 26, 2014 at 10:23 PM
Ferdinard, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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May 31, 2014 at 1:24 AM
Tanx a lot for commenting on my first poem,I wii join u in d contest as soon as possible
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May 26, 2014 at 8:22 PM
Ferdinard, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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May 31, 2014 at 1:33 AM
Hello, my name is Ferdinard Victory, from Nigeria and from a family of 8,am still in school.I'd b glad to b ur friend. Tanx for ur nice words.
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May 31, 2014 at 1:30 AM
Hello, my still remains as stated, am from Nigeria, from a family of 8, am still in school. I'd b glad to be ur friend. Tanx for ur words. I appreciate.
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