Rain

The daylight's darkness drops again,
The wind looses its controlling brain
And the dust protest in Peaceful anger
Thunder whispers banger
Hopeless than a motioned train
A droplet of a comic tragic rain!
Humans' legs on the race, 
So not to miss the trace,
As roofs struggle space of air
For roofs know not who erred 
The trees forced to bow
leting green and yellow pride down, 
Finally, heaven open it's doors,
As sky looses it's keys to doors
Now the earth is drowning 
Like the inhabitants are sorrowing.
But we may do without rain
But not water. Is water not rain?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 12, 2016 at 12:27 PM
yes, the imagery is epic... Love SKAT .
Ferdinard Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 2:12 PM
great work,logical arranged and meanings in metaphor
A   Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 7:39 AM
Ferdinard,, Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Mehta Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 6:45 AM
A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, Ferdinand
Ferdinard Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 12:31 AM
Nice poem and I love it, the rhymes are okay, diction easy to understand. Keep it up
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May 26, 2014 at 12:27 AM
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