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Rain

The daylight's darkness drops again, The wind looses its controlling brain And the dust protest in Peaceful anger Thunder whispers banger Hopeless than a motioned train A droplet of a comic tragic rain! Humans' legs on the race, So not to miss the trace, As roofs struggle space of air For roofs know not who erred The trees forced to bow leting green and yellow pride down, Finally, heaven open it's doors, As sky looses it's keys to doors Now the earth is drowning Like the inhabitants are sorrowing. But we may do without rain But not water. Is water not rain?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/12/2016 12:27:00 PM
yes, the imagery is epic... Love SKAT .
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Date: 5/17/2015 2:12:00 PM
great work,logical arranged and meanings in metaphor
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Date: 6/9/2014 7:39:00 AM
Ferdinard,, Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/9/2014 6:45:00 AM
A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, Ferdinand
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Date: 5/26/2014 12:31:00 AM
Nice poem and I love it, the rhymes are okay, diction easy to understand. Keep it up
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Date: 5/26/2014 12:27:00 AM
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